課題添削のお知らせ（Member's Only)

9月後半の課題添削 (9/30日までにご応募ください)

 

あなたは（eBayなどの）オークションサイトに何か品物を出品しました。しばらくすると、購入希望者より品物についての詳細情報を尋ねる英文メールが届きました。返信で、コンディションや色合いなどの詳細を説明すると共に、"good price"をつけてもらうための、付加情報（スペシャルフィーチャーや出品理由など）を加えて、品物の魅力もアピールしてください。

品物は、以下の中から選ぶか、またはオリジナルに考えてもかまいません。

 

a) an old leather jacket
b) an old computer/ laptop
c) an old toy you had as a kid

 

サンプルセンテンス

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Hi Steve,

 

Thanks for your interest in my old iMac. Actually, it's the very first version Apple made. It's bondi blue and white. Yes, it does have USB ports. In fact, it was the first Mac to have them. As for software, I upgraded the operating system to OS 9 and installed all kinds of stuff on it like Pagemaker, Photoshop, etc. (sorry, I can't remember which versions they are). Although the computer is pretty slow when it comes to using the Internet, you can still do just about anything you want on it. It's also in perfect condition. I have all the original software, documentation, and packaging. If you are a collector, I'm sure you'll be happy. It's basically 'like-new'. Anyway, if you have any other questions, let me know soon. The bidding ends Friday. Good Luck.

 

Mako Tanaka

 

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