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受信日時：2010 / 07 / 12 15:16:47 グレード : 
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名前
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Leigh Norrie |
日本のココが好き
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Furano/Biei in Hokkaido |
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国籍
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British |
日本のココがちょっと
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The morning commute |
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教師哲学
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Learning should be fun and stimulating - never boring
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好きな言葉
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Astronomical |
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 修正済センテンス |
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Hi Mari, |
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How are you doing? |
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You told me that you read many books do a lot of reading recently. |
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After I read your email, I felt like reading something, then I went to a public library. The library is the biggiest in Chuo ward. After I spend spent an hour reading magazines, I borrowed two books about interior design . My house is very old, so I wanted to coordinate the colors. I have no artistic sense, however. Are you good at color-coordinate color-coordinating ? If so, let me know the tips some tips. |
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Anyway, I hope you have a nice relaxing weekend. |
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Yuko |
紫:変更されたワード／赤:付加された必要ワード／緑:不必要なワード／青:意味が解りづらいもの
/ 青緑
: Impressive!(自然/クリエイティブな表現)
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先生からのコメント
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If your friend spend much time reading various books, you can say "do a lot of reading". |
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Very naturally expressed. |
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'Interior design' is what the book was about. |
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"color-coordinate" is a verb, so it should be "color-coordinating". |
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There is a wide variety of tips, so 'some tips' is correct. |
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A very nice sentiment. |
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| Good job, Yuko. You too, enjoy the weekend. |
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